ext_67665 ([identity profile] razberrycreme.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] soundczech 2009-12-24 11:01 pm (UTC)

jaslkj; The way you write Kame and Jin and Pi is perfect. Jin's longing for his mother :( He is such a mama's boy, it's adorable :(

“It’s risky...” Kame says, but from the tone of his voice it is clear that he is reluctant to use his usual Grinchy voice of reason. It’s a token effort that will fold at the slightest pressure, so Jin grabs Kame’s arms through the blankets and whines, “Kaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaame. COME ON, Kaaaaaaaaaaaaaaame.”

So cute and so them. I love that Kame wants to be reasonable but Jin KO's his defenses. :DD

Jin picks one of them up now and looks at Kame doubtfully. “Learning can be fun,” Kame says defensively.

“If you say so,” Jin says.


dead. XDDD

And the last scene ;slk; domestic Christmas for akamepi!! ♥ The entire fic is so wonderful. I am in love with your writing. Thank you for writing and posting. :")

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